A story in the making

mangyayari..
matino tlga tatay nya..
super sad lang..
eh si Phoebe..
naghahallucinate sya na binubugbog sya..

Kasi.. sa isip ni Phoebe
sinisisi sya nung father niya
tapos one yr nagsa-sulk ung father..
bago niya mabuo ung sarili niya..
sige I'll go with your idea :">
mas okay nga sgro kung may naaalala si Father kay Phoebe

Father is a loving husband and loving father.
When Mother died..
He was very sad..
I'll make them HS sweethearts maybe..
para SUPER long yung pinagsamahan nila..
Father was very very sad but he always struggle to do the daily chores for Phoebe... but when he sees Phoebe.. it triggers his longing for Mother..
because they are just too alike..
He can't eat in front of Phoebe can't take to look at her...
when He sees her he just starts shaking and crying..
which is misunderstood by Phoebe..

make one specific thing that they're alike.. like the way she smiles, or the eyes or the nose or the shape of the face..
cge, continue

She thinks her father is shaking in anger

nd blaming her inside..
the dimple and the smile maybe..
okay nb? :">

so, for a kid who knows what death implies
she then misunderstands anxiety for anger??
hmmm..
there's something wrong with this kid..
okay to okay to
kelangan convincing ang pag-sulat mo dito
kasi, kung mausisa ung magbabasa
parang inconsistent
naiintindihan ung death (which shows a lack of ignorance)
pero di naiintindihan ung feelings ng tatay (which shows too much innocence)
tpos too mature ung interpretation (which shows again a deep adult understanding)